I think he should have shot himself in the bathroom. Unless you're going further with the plot in general because for a short story, I think the ending should carry the weight of the entire composition. When it just stops. . .
I think it takes…
Aug 31, 2010
Nathan Hayden updated their profile photoAug 3, 2010
Lloyd shuffled to the door of his white, brown-trimmed two-story house, his yard dark save for his dim porch light, left on what he could only assume was considerately by his wife who, phased by dozens of these kinds of nights, was probably already asleep. Stepping on to the welcome mat of the patio, Lloyd sighed and pulled his keys from his pocket lazily and flicked them once, which, by the end of the motion, left his house key pressed between his thumb and index finger.Lloyd pushed his…See More